You tried with your analysis, but I was mixed up while going through the entire essay. It seems you were mixing up a lot of ideas in some paragraphs, and this made the whole essay confusing to me. When next you are analyzing a story, please take one aspect at a time and analyze it. You can only support the aspect you are analyzing by using outside sources, or quotes from the main text, and at the same time making sure that the relation is clear. You also had problems of integrating your secondary sources and citing them in the correct MLA style. Overall, you tried in your analysis.
You tried with your analysis, but I was mixed up while going through the entire essay. It seems you were mixing up a lot of ideas in some paragraphs, and this made the whole essay confusing to me. When next you are analyzing a story, please take one aspect at a time and analyze it. You can only support the aspect you are analyzing by using outside sources, or quotes from the main text, and at the same time making sure that the relation is clear. You also had problems of integrating your secondary sources and citing them in the correct MLA style. Overall, you tried in your analysis.
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